Just a quick thought about how we can use copywriting tricks and techniques without thinking about it. I was reading this excellent guide, and in particular the section on parallelism. It describes it as "the deliberate repetition of a particular word, phrasing or sentence structure for effect". So, for a really simple example, "Don't just do it, B&Q it".
Then I was listening to a copy of the new album by Brit pop-punkers You Me At Six, and a rather emo breakup anthem called "This Is The First Thing". The chorus goes...
This is the first thing I thought
This is the last thing that I want
You were the first one I loved
You were the first love I lost
Really simple, but with different words, it wouldn't be half as catchy. Perhaps singer Josh Franchesci has an alternative career ahead of him.
I'm an occasional freelance copywriter, but mostly a student at the School of Communication Arts in London. Previously an Account Manager at a small design agency, where I started writing copy and thinking up headlines and slogans. In fact, I've been writing all my life, but it never occurred to me I could make a living from it this way. So now I'm giving it a go.
23 Sept 2011
Pop-Punk Parallelism
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copywriting,
lyrics,
pop punk,
you me at six
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